Feedback on work done so far..

My current mark stands at 2.1/2.2. So far I have recieved a 2.2 in the Reflective Tools essay, which I was actually quite dissapointed with as I thought I had done it correctly but I think the feedback suggested that I did not go into enough depth and I mainly talked about my experiences with each reflective tool. I got a 2.1 for the Screen R presentation which I was really pleased about as I thought I had not done that well in it, but i proved myself wrong. I also got a 2.2 in the presentation for the game that we had to invent within the Screen School. Our idea was fairly simple and could not have been that much expanded so therefore we did not do as well as we hoped. I am hoping to get a good mark in the presentation for the museum project we are currently doing. I feel I have done a lot of research and put a lot of effort into the planning, however we need to work on how the presentation with flow when it comes to it. Practice is what we will have to work on as of now. Hopefully the work will pay off and let me pass the first year with a good grade!